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   교정강사   Noemi(C)    등록일   2021-05-16
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  HOMEWORK: A. Please tell me advantages and disadvanatages of Working From Home. It has pros and cons. The advantage is that I can work more comfortably and I use my time flexibly. On the other hands, there are disadvantages that it decrease concentration and sometimes it is less effective. B. Make these sentences into English. -회색 재킷으로 사겠어요. I'll get a gray jacket. -그의 사업은 아주 잘 되고 있어. His business is going well. -친구를 사귀어 보는 게 어때? Why don't you make a friend.
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HOMEWORK:

A. Please tell me advantages and disadvanatages of Working From Home.

 

It has pros and cons. 

The advantage is that I can work more comfortably and I use my time flexibly.  

 

On the other hands, there are disadvantages that it decrease concentration and sometimes it is less effective.

=> On the other hand, there are disadvantages. It ​decreases concentration and sometimes it is less effective.

 

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.  

 

 B. Make these sentences into English. 

-회색 재킷으로 사겠어요.

 I'll get a gray jacket.

=> I'll take the grey jacket.

 

=> Your answer is correct but here's another way of saying it.

 

-그의 사업은 아주 잘 되고 있어.

His business is going well.

=> His business is going extremely well.

 

=> Your answer is correct but here's another way of saying it. 

 

-친구를 사귀어 보는 게 어때?

Why don't you make a friend.

=> Why don't you make friends?

 

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically. 

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