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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-05-16
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  It has rained for 2 days. I can hear frogs singing now. I think they are exciting now. That's why it is raining. I am very lucky. I live in Seoul and I feel like living in countryside. Here is a thing; I wonder what they are singing about one another in the pond. It's dark and they'll sing songs during whole night. I love this apartment so our family members celebrated 2 year anniversary yesterday. Before I moved into this apartment, I never heard them. The songs remind me of my mom living in countryside. She is a farmer. When she works in the field in the evening, she also can hear the songs. I just texted to one of the table tennis club members with the audio file about the songs. I recorded it before in the park. He replyed soon. He likes them, too.
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It has been raining for two days. I can hear frogs singing now. I think they are excited. That’s why it is raining. I am very lucky. I live in Seoul and I feel like living in a countryside. Here is a thing; I wonder what they are singing about with one another in the pond. It's dark and they'll sing songs for the whole night. I love this apartment so our family members celebrated our second anniversary living in this house yesterday. Before I moved into this apartment, I never heard them singing.  The songs remind me of my mom who is living in the countryside. She is a farmer. When she works in the field in the evening, she also can hear some songs. I just texted one of the table tennis club members with the audio file about the songs. I recorded it before at the park. He replied to me and he likes them too.