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   제 목   Should the Colosseum be used again for cultural events or concerts?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-12-25
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  A.) Should the Colosseum be used again for cultural events or concerts? Please elaborate on your answer. The Colosseum is one of the world's heritages, which must be preserved. Continual use is said to be the best way to preserve a thing including a building. Using the Colosseum would be prominent. B.) Make these sentences into English. (12/21/22) 1. 가는 동안 어디 들려서 뭘 좀 드시겠어요? Will you stop for dining something while going? 2. 비행은 어땠나요? How was the flight? 3. 시차 때문에 힘드시겠어요. You will be tired of jet lag.
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A.) Should the Colosseum be used again for cultural events or concerts? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The Colosseum is one of the world's heritages, which must be preserved.

Continual use is said to be the best way to preserve a thing including a building.

Using the Colosseum would be prominent.    

 

 B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(12/21/22)

 

1. 가는 동안 어디 들려서 뭘 좀 드시겠어요?

   Will you stop for dining something while going?  

   

2. 비행은 어땠나요?

  How was the flight?  

  

3. 시차 때문에 힘드시겠어요.

  You will be tired of jet lag.

=>  You must have jet lag.


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.