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   제 목   HOMEWORK 12/20 ~ 12/22    상 태  
   교정강사   Rona(C)    등록일   2022-12-29
   작성내용
  12/20 심순이가 누구니? Who is Simsoon? 그녀는 우리반 친구야. 자전거도 잘 타고 피아노도 잘 쳐. She is my classmate. She can ride a bike and play piano well. 누가 심순이니? Who is Simsoon? 12/22 응, 가서 인사해. Yes, go and say hello. "안녕? 무슨 일이니? 내 말 들리니?" "Hello? What's the matter? Can you hear me?" 맛있는 냄새가 난다. It smells good.
   교정내용
 

12/20 


 Who is Simsoon? 


 She is my classmate. She can ride a bike and play piano well. —> She can ride a bike and play the piano well. 

=> This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it. 


Who is Simsoon? —> Which girl is Simsoon?

=> This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it. 


12/22 


Yes, go and say hello. —> Yes she is. Go and say hello to her.

=> This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it. 


"Hello? What's the matter? Can you hear me?" 

=> This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it. 


It smells good.