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   제 목   HOMEWORK 12/27 ~ 12/29    상 태  
   교정강사   Rona(C)    등록일   2022-12-29
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  12/27 니나를 봐. 그녀는 키가 크고 다리도 길어. Look at Nina. She is tall and has long legs. 그녀는 예쁘고 눈도 커. She is pretty and has big eyes. 응. 그녀는 정말 예뻐. Yes. She is really beautiful. 12/29 넣었어. 먹어 볼게. I put in. Let me try. "우웩! 너무 짜다. 소금을 얼마나 넣었니?" "Yuck! It is too salty. How much salt did you put in?" 소금 한 컵. A cup of salt. I'm sorry I didn't do my homework on time. I'll pay more attention from now on.
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12/27


Look at Nina. She is tall and has long legs. √​


She is pretty and has big eyes. √​


Yes. She is really beautiful. √​


12/29


I put in. Let me try. —> I put it in. Let me try.

=> Corrected : The sentences were corrected grammatically.​


"Yuck! It is too salty. How much salt did you put in?" √​


A cup of salt. √​


I'm sorry I didn't do my homework on time. I'll pay more attention from now on. ---> It's okay. :-)

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