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   제 목   2023.01.19    상 태  
   교정강사   Noemi(C)    등록일   2023-01-20
   작성내용
  A. Do you think nursing is a good career? Why? Why not? i think it's a good jod.Most of all it suits my daughter's aptitude.Her dearm since middle school was to become a nurse. B. Make these sentences into English. (01/19/22) 1. Sally는 천천히 걷는다. Sally walks slowly. 2. Maria는 Sally만큼 천천히 걷는다. Maria walks as slowly as Sally. 3. Helen은 Sally보다 천천히 걷는다. Helen walks slower than Sally.
   교정내용
 

A. Do you think nursing is a good career? Why? Why not?

i think it's a good jod.

 => I think, it's a good job.

  => Corrected: The capitalization and spelling of this sentence have been corrected.  

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Most of all it suits my daughter's aptitude.

 => Most of all, it suits my daughter's aptitude.

  => Corrected: The punctuation of this sentence has been corrected.   

 

Her dearm since middle school was to become a nurse.

 => Her dream since middle school was to become a nurse.

  => Corrected: The spelling ​of this sentence has been corrected. 

 

 B. Make these sentences into English. 

 (01/19/22)

 1. Sally는 천천히 걷는다.

Sally walks slowly.           

 

2. Maria는 Sally만큼 천천히 걷는다.

Maria walks as slowly as Sally.           

 

3. Helen은 Sally보다 천천히 걷는다.

Helen walks slower than Sally.​