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   제 목   2023.01.17    상 태  
   교정강사   Noemi(C)    등록일   2023-01-20
   작성내용
  A. What do children receive during Lunar New Year? Why? They get pocket money. In Korea,it is called 세뱃돈. B. Make these sentences into English. (01/17/22) 1. Jean이모네 집은 크다. Aunt jean's houes is big. 2. Sam 삼촌네 집이 Jean 이모네 집보다 크다. Uncls Sam's house is bigger than aunt Jean's house. 3. 그 중에서는 할아버지네 집이 제일 크다. among them, my grandfather's house is largest.
   교정내용
 

A. What do children receive during Lunar New Year? Why?

They get pocket money. 

 => They receive money/allowance.

  => Your sentence was understandable, but here's a better way of saying it. 

• allowance = an amount of money that is given to someone regularly or for a specific purpose

example : a monthly allowance for household expenses

 

In Korea,it is called 세뱃돈.

 => In Korea, it is called 세뱃돈.

  => Corrected: The spacing of this sentence has been corrected.  ​  

 

 B. Make these sentences into English. 

 (01/17/22)

 1. Jean이모네 집은 크다.

Aunt jean's houes is big.

 => Aunt Jean's house is big.

  => Corrected: The spelling and capitalization of this sentence have been corrected.  ​   

 

2. Sam 삼촌네 집이 Jean 이모네 집보다 크다.

Uncls Sam's house is bigger than aunt Jean's house.

 => Uncle Sam's house is bigger than Aunt Jean's.

  => Corrected: The grammar of this sentence has been corrected.  ​  

 

3. 그 중에서는 할아버지네 집이 제일 크다.

among them, my grandfather's house is largest.​ 

 => The grandfather's house is the biggest among them.

  => Corrected: The grammar of this sentence has been corrected.  ​