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   제 목   Should a country’s leader have an official home?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2023-03-12
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  A.) Should a country’s leader have an official home? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer. Country's leaders such as president or premier can be likened to the captain in a ship. Any accident to him or her could arouse a danger to the country. So the official home with special protection should be necessary to the country's leaders. B.) Make these sentences into English. (03/08/23) 1. 총 주문품을 14 일 내로 발송할 수 있습니다. All the orders can be sent within 14 days. 2. 수송하는데 2 일은 걸립니다. It will take 2 days to transport. 3. 주문을 받은 후 보통 2 주 정도 걸립니다. It will usually take around 2 weeks after being ordered.
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A.) Should a country’s leader have an official home? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Country's leaders such as president or premier can be likened to the captain in a ship.  

Any accident to him or her could arouse a danger to the country.

So the official home with special protection should be necessary to the country's leaders.   

   

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(03/08/23)

 

1. 총 주문품을 14 일 내로 발송할 수 있습니다.

All the orders can be sent within 14 days.  

 

2. 수송하는데 2 일은 걸립니다.

It will take 2 days to transport.  

 

3. 주문을 받은 후 보통 2 주 정도 걸립니다.

It will usually take around 2 weeks after being ordered.  

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.