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  It stopped raining in the morning. It rained 3 days in a row. I was happy when it was fine. I was having a cup of coffee while sitting on a chair over sunlight on the veranda. The air is clean so I want to go to the park but I'll give up and I'll go to the table tennis club in the evening. I used to walk alone at the park and in the mountain but it was loney. I hate being alone. When I take a walk at the park, I think about everything around me. While I am sitting on a bench, I write poems with my smartphone. It is good but I prefer playing table tennis than being alone. I am changed now. My life is simple. I can hear the birds singing outside now even though I am at home. My neighborhood is excellent! Bye
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It stopped raining in the morning. It rained for 3 consecutive days. I was happy when it was fine. I was having a cup of coffee while sitting on a chair over the sunlight in the veranda. The air is clean so I want to go to the park but I'll give up and I'll go to the table tennis club in the evening.

I used to walk alone at the park and in the mountain but it was lonely. I hate being alone. When I take a walk at the park, I think about everything around me. While I am sitting on a bench, I write poems with my smartphone. It is good but I prefer playing table tennis than being alone. I am changed now. My life is simple. I can hear the birds singing outside now even though I am at home. My neighborhood is excellent! Bye