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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-05-19
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  I bought a table tennis racket's case online last night. There were so many kinds of cases so it was very hard to choose it. Because I couldn't touch them, I was trying to read the information they provide for the racket in detail. Finally I chose two of them and table tennis balls as well. I have two rackets and I need two cases. All that matters was quality. so I bought them with a proper price. If I bought them with a cheap price, I am not sure that they guarantee their quality. As I wrestled with choosing them, I kept up very late at night. Even though I finally payed for them on my smartphone, I couldn't fall asleep. I tossed and turned for the whole night. I have a lesson through this. I should not wrestle with something at night. It ruins my sleep. Bye
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I bought a table tennis racket's case online last night. There were so many kinds of cases so it was very hard for me to choose. Because I couldn't touch them, I was trying to read the information they provided for the racket in detail. Finally, I chose two cases out of them and table tennis balls as well. I have two rackets and I need two cases. All that matters to me was the quality. So, I bought them with the proper / accurate price. If I bought them with the cheap price, I would not be sure about their quality. As I wrestled in choosing them, I stayed up very late at night. Even though I finally paid for them on my smartphone, I couldn't fall asleep. I tossed and turned for the whole night. I have a lesson through this. I should not wrestle with something at night. It ruins my sleep. Bye