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   교정강사   Mariel(C)    등록일   2021-05-20
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  HOMEWORK: A. What does “inner beauty” mean to you? B. "Inner beauty" means the beauty of the mind. I think the beauty of the mind is more important than the appearance. -우리 그 얘기 그냥 그만할 수 없어? Can't we just stop talking about it? -제가 도와 드릴게요. I can help you. or Let me help you. NEXT LESSON: Core English-Intermediate 1 P. 51 (05/20/2021)
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What does “inner beauty” mean to you?

 "Inner beauty" means the beauty of the mind. 

I think the beauty of the mind is more important than the appearance. --> I think that mental beauty is more important than physical beauty. => Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

 

Can't we just stop talking about it? --> Can we just drop it?

I can help you. or Let me help you. --> Let me give you a hand. 

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.