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   제 목   Should people wear their country's traditional clothes?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2023-04-26
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  A.) Should people wear their country's traditional clothes? Please elaborate on your answer. A region's clothes have been developed with various elements such as climate, fabric industry, custom, preference. In the age when travel was not free, people could not think of other than their tradition clothes. However today, almost all people can easily access to other culture. So it must be left to individual selection whether they wear traditional clothes or not. B.) Make these sentences into English. (04/25/22) 1. 일주일 정도 앞당길 수 있습니다. It could be advanced by a week. 2. 주문을 다시 한 번 더 확인할게요. I will confirm the order once more. 3. 그래도 괜찮겠습니까? Is it OK?
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A.) Should people wear their country's traditional clothes? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

 

A region's clothes have been developed with various elements such as climate, fabric industry, custom, preference.

In the age when travel was not free, people could not think of other than their tradition clothes. 

However today, almost all people can easily access to other culture. 

So it must be left to individual selection whether they wear traditional clothes or not.        ​ 

 

=>  A region's clothes have been developed with various elements such as climate, fabric industry, custom, and preference.

In the age when travel was not free, people could not think of other than their traditional clothes. 

However today, almost all people can easily access other cultures. 

So it must be left to the individual selection whether they wear traditional clothes or not.     

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(04/25/22)

 

1. 일주일 정도 앞당길 수 있습니다.

It could be advanced by a week.  

 

2. 주문을 다시 한 번 더 확인할게요.

I will confirm the order once more.  

 

3. 그래도 괜찮겠습니까?

Is it OK?  

=>  Would that be acceptable?

 


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.