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   교정강사   Happy(C)    등록일   2023-05-22
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  A. Describe Hanok in a simple way. We use 'giwa'(rock for tile) for the roof of Hanok. In the wall, we use wood for frame and sand to fill the wall. In Hanok, you are cool in summer and warm in winter. Hanok has not only one house. There's one main house and a few small houses like kitchen, restroom. B. Make these sentences into English. (05/16/22) 1. 너 오늘 행복해 보인다. You look really happy. 2. 응, 정말 행복해. 오늘 체육 수업이 들었거든. Yes, I'm happy. I have a PE class. 3. 너 오늘 행복해 보인다(I think it's same to 1) You look really happy.
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A. Describe Hanok in a simple way.

We use 'giwa'(rock for tile) for the roof of Hanok.

In the wall, we use wood for frame and sand to fill the wall.

In Hanok, you are cool in summer and warm in winter.

Hanok has not only one house. There's one main house and a few small houses like kitchen, restroom.