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   교정강사   Happy(C)    등록일   2023-05-29
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  A. Make a diary for tomorrow(5/26 Fri.). Today my school had a sports day. We played some events with class competition. (There's 6 classes in 1st grade) We played relay, basketball, and tug-of-war. The events' results are; Basketball: my team got 3rd. Tug-of-war: we lost to Class 5. Relay: Actually I didn't do it, but our class did well so we got 1st! Our class got 3rd at total. I think I and my class did very well! B. Make these sentences into English. (05/25/22) 1. 그럼 토요일 어떠니? 시험 끝난 후에는 괜찮은데. How about Saturday? I'm okay after the exam. 2. 그거 좋다! It sounds great! 3. 수학 시험 끝난후/ 토요일 After the exam/ Saturday
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A. Make a diary for tomorrow(5/26 Fri.).

Today my school had a sports day. We played some events with class competition. (There's 6 classes in 1st grade) 

We played relay, basketball, and tug-of-war. The events' results are;

Basketball: my team got 3rd. Tug-of-war: we lost to Class 5. Relay: Actually I didn't do it, but our class did well so we got 1st!

Our class got 3rd at total. I think I and my class did very well!

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(05/25/22)

1. 그럼 토요일 어떠니? 시험 끝난 후에는 괜찮은데.

How about Saturday? I'm okay after the exam.

2. 그거 좋다!

It sounds great!

3. 수학 시험 끝난후/ 토요일

After the exam/ Saturday

So happy to hear that you had a great time at your school sports day. Hope that you will have more time to play with your friends. Also, thank you for answering your homework. Well done!!!​