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   교정강사   Happy(C)    등록일   2023-06-05
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  Make sentences with the following words: DETENTION / TIME MACHINE / WASTE I've never been detentioned because I'm a good student. If I get a time machine, I'll go past and I'll say the lottery numbers. We should waste little to save the environment. [Make these sentences into English] (06/01/22) 1. 미미요 I'm Mimi. 2. 몇 살이니? How old are you? 3. 여덟살 I'm eight years old.
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​Make sentences with the following words: DETENTION / TIME MACHINE / WASTE

I've never been detentioned because I'm a good student.

Corrected: I've never been detained the detention room because I'm a good student.​

If I get a time machine, I'll go past and I'll say the lottery numbers.