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   제 목   Does the Council of Europe have the power to make Russia pay for the war damages in Ukraine?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2023-06-20
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  A Does the Council of Europe have the power to make Russia pay for the war damages in Ukraine? Please elaborate on your answer. The Council of Europe is an organization with membership, which means that it has no power to non-members. Russia was expelled before the resolution of paying for the war damage was made. So it will not impact on Russia. B 1. 주문이 들어올 때마다 천 달러의 성공 사례금을 드립니다. 1,000 dollars of reward will be paid for each order. 2. 매출 목표액을 달성했습니다. We accomplished the targeted amount of sales. 3. 제 3 분기 매출 목표를 달성했습니다. We reached the third quarter goal of the sale.
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​A

 

Does the Council of Europe have the power to make Russia pay for the war damages in Ukraine? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The Council of Europe is an organization with membership, which means that it has no power to non-members. Russia was expelled before the resolution of paying for the war damage was made. So it will not impact on Russia.

 

=>  The Council of Europe is an organization with membership, meaning it has no power over non-members. Russia was expelled before paying for the war damage was resolved. So it will not impact Russia.​

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B

 

1. 주문이 들어올 때마다 천 달러의 성공 사례금을 드립니다.

1,000 dollars of reward will be paid for each order.  ✔

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2. 매출 목표액을 달성했습니다.

We accomplished the targeted amount of sales.  ✔​

 

 

3. 제 3 분기 매출 목표를 달성했습니다.

We reached the third quarter goal of the sale.  ✔

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.