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   제 목   2021.05.13. homework    상 태  
   교정강사   Noemi(C)    등록일   2021-05-20
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  A. What foods have you tasted which you will never forget for the rest of your life? Tell me about them. : I can't forget the food when I ate in Vietnam, I went to travel in Vietnam, muinae 5 years ago. muinae is a vacation spot having beach. I ate the kebab at muinae's restaurant with wonderful view. I can't forget not only taste but also view especially much feelings about the region. B. Make these sentences into English. -난 네가 무슨 말을 하고 있는지 모르겠어. : I don't know what you're saying. -커피 남은 것 있니? : Is there any coffee left? -나는 방학 때 여행하고 싶다. : I want to travel in my vacation.
   교정내용
 

A. What foods have you tasted which you will never forget for the rest of your life? Tell me about them.

: I can't forget the food when I ate in Vietnam,

  => I can't forget the food I had in Vietnam.

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.    

 

  I went to travel in Vietnam, muinae 5 years ago. 

  => I went to Vietnam, in Mũi Né. five years ago.

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.   

 

muinae is a vacation spot having beach.​

  => Mũi Né is a vacation spot that has a beach.

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.   

 

  I ate the kebab at muinae's restaurant with wonderful view.

  => I ate kebab at a restaurant in Mũi Né with a wonderful view.
  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.  

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

-난 네가 무슨 말을 하고 있는지 모르겠어. : I don't know what you're saying.

  => I have no idea what you're talking about.

  => Your answer is correct but here's another way of saying it.

 

-커피 남은 것 있니? : Is there any coffee left?  

 

 

-나는 방학 때 여행하고 싶다. : I want to travel in my vacation.​ 

  => I'll like to hit the road when I'm on vacation.

  => Your answer is correct but here's another way of saying it.