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   제 목   Should Mr. Limjaroerat be Thailand’s new prime minister?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2023-06-20
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  A Should Mr. Limjaroerat be Thailand’s new prime minister? Please elaborate on your answer. Thailand seems to have been sunk in endless loop of military coups. It needs breakthrough from the loop. Young generation-lead government would be one of the solutions. So Mr. Limjaroerat should be admitted to be its new premier. B (06/14/22) 1. 다른 날은 안 될까요? Could I change it to another date? 2. 저 대신에 다른 사람을 만나시겠습니까? Would you meet another person for me? 3. 죄송하지만, 다른 계획이 있습니다. I am sorry, but I have a different plan.
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A

 

Should Mr. Limjaroerat be Thailand’s new prime minister? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Thailand seems to have been sunk in endless loop of military coups.

It needs breakthrough from the loop.

Young generation-lead government would be one of the solutions.

So Mr. Limjaroerat should be admitted to be its new premier. 

 

=>  Thailand seems to have been sunk in an endless loop of military coups.

It needs a breakthrough from the loop.

The young generation-led government would be one of the solutions.

So Mr. Limjaroerat should be admitted to be its new premier. ​

 

 

B

 

(06/14/22)

 

1. 다른 날은 안 될까요?

Could I change it to another date?  

 

2. 저 대신에 다른 사람을 만나시겠습니까?

Would you meet another person for me?  

 

 

3. 죄송하지만, 다른 계획이 있습니다.

I am sorry, but I have a different plan.  

 

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.