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   제 목   Why is the Patek Philippe watch an important Chinese historical item?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2023-06-20
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  A Why is the Patek Philippe watch an important Chinese historical item? Please elaborate on your answer. The Patek Philippe watch would be proof they witnessed the owner's trail with heavy seas. The owner was once the Emperor of the great empire, the Ching dynasty. That itself would show its historical importance. B (06/19/23) 1. 제 사무실은 어떤가요? How do you feel about my office? 2. 조용한 곳이면 됩니다. A quiet place will be ok. 3. 근처에 있는 커피숍에서 만나도 괜찮으십니까? Can we meet at an adjacent coffee shop?
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A

 

Why is the Patek Philippe watch an important Chinese historical item? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The Patek Philippe watch would be proof they witnessed the owner's trail with heavy seas. 

The owner was once the Emperor of the great empire, the Ching dynasty.

That itself would show its historical importance.     

 

 

B

 

(06/19/23)

 

1. 제 사무실은 어떤가요?

How do you feel about my office?  

 

2. 조용한 곳이면 됩니다.

A quiet place will be ok.  

 

3. 근처에 있는 커피숍에서 만나도 괜찮으십니까?

Can we meet at an adjacent coffee shop?  

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.