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   제 목   Is it important to match the jars to the correct coffins?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2023-07-09
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  A.) Is it important to match the jars to the correct coffins? Please elaborate on your answer. The jars are said to contain internal organs which could be informative of health or disease. So matching records of jars and coffins might contribute to medical development. That could be an importance point. B.) Make these sentences into English. (07/03/23) 1. 처음에는 부품 공급 회사로 시작했었습니다. At first, we started as a firm of compartment supply. 2. 대량 35 년간 사업을 해 왔습니다. We have done business for approximately 35 years. 3. 우리 회사는 그런 유형으로는한국 최초였습니다. Our company was the first of such a kind in Korea.
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A.) Is it important to match the jars to the correct coffins? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The jars are said to contain internal organs which could be informative of health  or disease.

So matching records of jars and coffins might contribute to medical development. 

That could be an importance point.            

 

=>  The jars contain internal organs that could be informative of health or disease.

So matching records of jars and coffins might contribute to medical development. 

That could be an important point.            ​

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/03/23)

 

1. 처음에는 부품 공급 회사로 시작했었습니다.

At first, we started as a firm of compartment supply.    

2. 대량 35 년간 사업을 해 왔습니다.

We have done business for approximately 35 years.  

3. 우리 회사는 그런 유형으로는한국 최초였습니다.

Our company was the first of such a kind in Korea.  

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.