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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-05-21
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  I would live in Boracay in the philliphines. I visited that island 2 years ago with my whole family. I love Henin resort there. It was expensive but its facilities was good. My husband and I swam in the pool looking at the sea. I knew that many people from other countries were there and they really enjoyed the beach. Some of them were dancing at the front yard in the pub house. This island is small and we just enjoyed the simple location. If I live in the island, I could easily get a simple life. I would sign up for the English class in lingulistic institution there. We already stopped by the institution and looked around it including dormitory. We would learn English in the morning and go to the beach in the afternoon. It is my dream. Bye
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I would live in Boracay in the Philippines. I visited that island 2 years ago with my whole family. I love Henin resort. It was expensive but the facilities were good. My husband and I swam in the pool while looking at the sea. I knew that many people from other countries were there and they really enjoyed the beach. Some of them were dancing at the front yard in the pub house. This island is small and we just enjoyed the simple location. If I lived in the island, I could easily get a simple life. I would sign up for the English class in linguistic institution there. We already stopped by in the institution and looked around there including the dormitory. We would learn English in the morning and go to the beach in the afternoon. It is my dream. Bye