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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2023-07-30
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  A.) Will people be discouraged from visiting France if the government restricts visitors to certain places? Please elaborate on your answer. Restriction to visitinf a place will be likely to make people more interested in it. This means that France government's restriction will fail. B.) Make these sentences into English. (07/24/23) 1. 모든 게 계획대로 진행된다면 그 빚은 내년 말까지 갚을 수 있을 겁니다. If everything progresses as planed, the debt can be payed back by the end of next year. 2. 저희는 10 년간 변함없이 수익을 냈습니다. We have made profits constantly for a decade. 3. 많은 유동자본금을 확보했습니다. We have secured much liquid money or capital.
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A.) Will people be discouraged from visiting France if the government restricts visitors to certain places? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Restriction to visiting a place will be likely to make people more interested in it.

This means that France government's restriction will fail.    

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/24/23)

 

1. 모든 게 계획대로 진행된다면 그 빚은 내년 말까지 갚을 수 있을 겁니다.

If everything progresses as planed, the debt can be payed back by the end of next year.

=>  If everything progresses as planned, the debt can be paid back by the end of next year.​

 

 

2. 저희는 10 년간 변함없이 수익을 냈습니다.

We have made profits constantly for a decade.  

 

3. 많은 유동자본금을 확보했습니다.

We have secured much liquid money or capital. 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.