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   제 목   Should scientists try to find out more about the oarfish?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2023-08-27
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  A.) Should scientists try to find out more about the oarfish? Please elaborate on your answer. Knowledge of other species of animals would help people understand themselves more. No reason can be found to exclude the case of the oarfish. So it could not be recommended for scientists to stop studying the oarfish. B.) Make these sentences into English. (08/25/23) 1. 당사 공장을 둘러 보시겠습니까? Would you mind touring our factory? 2. 이것은 당사의 새로운 연구소입니다. This is our new laboratory. 3. 공장을 간단하게 시찰해 볼까요? Could I inspect the factory simply?
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A.) Should scientists try to find out more about the oarfish? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Knowledge of other species of animals would help people understand themselves more. 

No reason can be found to exclude the case of the oarfish.

So it could not be recommended for scientists to stop studying the oarfish.  

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(08/25/23)

 

1. 당사 공장을 둘러 보시겠습니까?

Would you mind touring our factory?  

 

2. 이것은 당사의 새로운 연구소입니다.

This is our new laboratory.  

 

3. 공장을 간단하게 시찰해 볼까요?

Could I inspect the factory simply?

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=>  Why don't we take a quick tour of the factory?


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.