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   제 목   Very cute brother whom in our church    상 태  
   교정강사   Stella(D)O    등록일   2023-10-15
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  Every Sunday I was went to the church. I went to the church since when I was my mother`s stomach. So I believe Jesus. But their is one more reason I`m go to the church. their is lovely little brother. He is not our family but in every Sunday I can see him. His name is Baek Da-yeon and he is 6 years old. He's the cutest kid I've ever seen. He also like me too. I`m very happy because of he. I wish my brother was cute like him. But he is very ugly and he is not care of what i`m saying.
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A very cute boy in our church. 

 

 It's our tradition that every Sunday we always go to church. I have attended church ever since I was in my mother's womb. So I believe in Jesus. But there is one more reason why I want to go to church. There is a lovely little boy. He is not in our family, but every Sunday I can see him. He is my churchmate. His name is Baek Da-yeon, and he is 6 years old. He's the cutest kid I've ever seen. He also likes me. I`m very happy because of him. I wish my brother was cute like him. But my brother is very ugly, and he doesn't care what I'm saying.