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   제 목   Is it more beneficial for the Maldives to have closer ties with China than India?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2023-10-29
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  A.) Is it more beneficial for the Maldives to have closer ties with China than India? Please elaborate on your answer. Keeping a balance between two confronting powers would be the best in foreign affairs. Leaning to one side would arouse the other's adversity, which might endanger a country in revenge. So, an intimate relationship with China can't be said to be more beneficial to the Maldives. B.) Make these sentences into English. (10/27/23) 1. 하청 업자의 변경으로 우리의 고객 만족도 문제를 해결해 줄지도 모릅니다. Altering outsourcing partners may solve our problem of customer satisfaction. 2. 이 신제품은 몇 백만 달러의 이익을 낼 것으로 예상됩니다. This new product is anticipated to make profits of a few million dollars. 3. 경기가 내년쯤이면 나아질 것으로 예상합니다. We expect that the economy will be better by next year
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A.) Is it more beneficial for the Maldives to have closer ties with China than India? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Keeping a balance between two confronting powers would be the best in foreign affairs.

Leaning to one side would arouse the other's adversity, which might endanger a country in revenge.

So, an intimate relationship with China can't be said to be more beneficial to the Maldives.  

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(10/27/23)

 

1. 하청 업자의 변경으로 우리의 고객 만족도 문제를 해결해 줄지도 모릅니다.

Altering outsourcing partners may solve our problem of customer satisfaction.  

 

2. 이 신제품은 몇 백만 달러의 이익을 낼 것으로 예상됩니다.

This new product is anticipated to make profits of a few million dollars.  

 

3. 경기가 내년쯤이면 나아질 것으로 예상합니다.

We expect that the economy will be better by next year.  


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.