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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-05-24
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  The temperature is high so it seems like summer. Well, my table tennis partner often texts me these days. I feel pain on my right knee so I get blue. I said to him about that, and he cared about me. He also used to feel pain on his knee. He understands how much I get painful. We are good friends. Sometimes he is better than my husband. haha. I am happy with playing table tennis now. But if I can't do that in the future, I would be terrable then. In order not to do so, I take 2 nutrient tablets for knees after having breakfast. My table tennis partner recommended me of the nutrient. My husband said, "you should loose weight. expecially, have less dinner. I think he is right.
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The temperature is high so it seems like summer. Well, my table tennis partner often texts me these days. I feel pain on my right knee so I get blue. I told him about   that and he cared about me. He also used to feel pain on his knee. He understands how much I get pain. We are good friends. Sometimes he is better than my husband. ha-ha.I am happy playing table tennis now. But if I can't do that in the future, I will be terrible then. In order not to do so, I take two vitamins / medicines for my knees after breakfast. My table tennis partner recommended the vitamins / medicines. My husband said, "you should lose weight”. Especially, eat less for dinner I think he is right.