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   제 목   Why do cultural practices and heritage sites need to be protected?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-01-08
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  A.) Why do cultural practices and heritage sites need to be protected? Please elaborate on your answer. Cultural practices refer to such intangible factors as traditions, skills, and knowledge while heritage sites include what can be seen or touched. Whether they are tangible or not, they are all parts of human history and the basis or base of our living. That would be why cultural practices and heritage sites need to be protected. B.) Make these sentences into English. (01/08/24) 1. 귀사의 사업자 등록증, 주식동향표와 회사 제안서 사본이 필요합니다. We need your business registration certificate, stock change sheet, and company proposal. 2. 지역 수입자 명단을 받을 수 있을까요? Could I receive the list of local importers. 3. 계약을 맺기 전에 귀사의 신용조회 자료와 은행자료가 필요합니다. Before concluding the contract, we need your credit reference and bank data.
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A.) Why do cultural practices and heritage sites need to be protected? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Cultural practices refer to such intangible factors as traditions, skills, and knowledge while heritage sites include what can be seen or touched.

Whether they are tangible or not, they are all parts of human history and the basis or base of our living.

That would be why cultural practices and heritage sites need to be protected.  

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(01/08/24)

 

1. 귀사의 사업자 등록증, 주식동향표와 회사 제안서 사본이 필요합니다.

We need your business registration certificate, stock change sheet, and company proposal.  

 

2. 지역 수입자 명단을 받을 수 있을까요?

Could I receive the list of local importers.

=>  Could you please provide a list of local importers?

 

3. 계약을 맺기 전에 귀사의 신용조회 자료와 은행자료가 필요합니다.

Before concluding the contract,  we need your credit reference and bank data.  

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.