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   제 목   How can a new president improve a country’s economy?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-05-02
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  A.) How can a new president improve a country’s economy? Please elaborate on your answer. The relation of economy and president could be likened to that of ship and lighthouse. The role of president should be to support businesses in difficulties like the lighthouse lighting ships on the dark seaway. He or she must refrain from leading them of himself or herself as the impossibility of the lighthouse becoming the captain of economy ship. B.) Make these sentences into English. (04/26/24) 1. 다 방법이 있죠 I can manage it. 2. 네 남자친구는 마음이 넓어 보여 Your boyfriend appears broad-minded. 3. 그녀는 나 한테 마음이 없는거 같아서 포기했어 She didn't seemed attraced to me so I stopped there.
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A.) How can a new president improve a country’s economy? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The relation of economy and president could be likened to that of ship and lighthouse.

The role of president should be to support businesses in difficulties like the lighthouse lighting  ships on  the dark seaway.

He or she must refrain from leading them of himself or herself as the impossibility of the lighthouse  becoming the captain of economy ship.

 

=>  The relationship of the economy and the president could be likened to that of a ship and lighthouse.

The role of the president should be to support businesses in difficulties like the lighthouse lighting ships on the dark seaway.

He or she must refrain from leading them of himself or herself as the impossibility of the lighthouse becoming the captain of the economy ship.​

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(04/26/24)

 

1. 다 방법이 있죠

I can manage it.  ✔️

2. 네 남자친구는 마음이 넓어 보여

Your boyfriend appears broad-minded.  ✔️

​3. 그녀는 나 한테 마음이 없는거 같아서 포기했어

She  didn't seemed attraced to me so I stopped there.

=>  ​She didn't seem interested in me, so I gave up.


  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.