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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-05-13
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  A.) Would you like to see a total solar eclipse? Please elaborate on your answer. When I did not have knowledge about the eclipse, I thought of it as special omens which would be derived from legends. But since I recognized that it is just a phenomenon, I have not been interested in it. B.) Make these sentences into English. (05/10/24) 1. 보통 우리는 더치페이 해 We usually pay separately. 2. 그냥 마음을 비워 You had better not clear your mind. 3. 내 생각에는 그녀가 오버하는거 같아 I think her to overdo.
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A.) Would you like to see a total solar eclipse? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

When I did not have knowledge about the eclipse, I thought of it as  special omens which would be derived from legends.

But since I recognized that it is just a phenomenon, I have not been interested in it.

 

=>  When I did not know about the eclipse, I thought of it as a special omen that would be derived from legends.

However, I have not been interested in it since I recognized that it is just a phenomenon.

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(05/10/24)

 

1. 보통 우리는 더치페이 해

We usually pay separately.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=>  Most of the time we just go Dutch.

 

2. 그냥 마음을 비워

You had better not clear your mind.

=>  Just let it go.

 

3. 내 생각에는 그녀가 오버하는거 같아

I think her to overdo. 

=>  I think she's going overboad.

 

  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.