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   교정강사   Happy(C)    등록일   2024-05-21
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  A. Make sentences using these words: WEIGHTLIFTING / CAREER / STAY IN SHAPE Some weightlifting athletes can lift over 200kg dumbells. I want teacher as my career. It's so hard to stay in shape. Many foods are enough delicious to eat too much. B. Make these sentences into English. (05/16/24) 1. 엄마, 저 목 말라요. Mom, I'm thirsty. 2. 물 주세요. Give me some water. 3. 계곡에 물이 많아. A lot of water is in this valley.
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A. Make sentences using these words: WEIGHTLIFTING / CAREER / STAY IN SHAPE

Some weightlifting athletes can lift over 200kg dumb bells.

 

I want teacher as my career.

 

It's so hard to stay in shape. Many foods are enough delicious to eat too much.

Better: It's hard to stay in shape. There are many delicious foods to eat.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(05/16/24)

1. 엄마, 저 목 말라요.

Mom, I'm thirsty. ✔

2. 물 주세요.

Give me some water.✔​

 

3. 계곡에 물이 많아.

A lot of water is in this valley. ✔​​