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   제 목   Why are several human rights groups worried about Mr. Noboa's crackdown?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-05-28
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  A.) Why are several human rights groups worried about Mr. Noboa's crackdown? There have been many crackdowns around the world through the history. We have seen or heard that they were accompanied by infringing innocent persons' rights. This might be the reason why human rights groups are worried about Mr. Noboa's crackdown. B.) Make these sentences into English. (05/27/24) 1. 도대체 넌 언제 철이 들까? Could I see you grown up? 2. 털어 놓아 봐 You can come out with it. 3. 색깔이 너무 튀지 I wonder if its color stands out?
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​A.) Why are several human rights groups worried about Mr. Noboa's crackdown?

 

There have been many crackdowns around the world throughout history.

We have seen or heard that they were accompanied by infringing innocent persons' rights.

This might be the reason why human rights groups are worried about Mr. Noboa's crackdown.  ✔️

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B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(05/27/24)

 

1. 도대체 넌 언제 철이 들까?

 Could I see you grown up?

=>  When are you ever going to grow up?​

 

2. 털어 놓아 봐

You can come out with it.   ✔️​

 

3. 색깔이 너무 튀지

I wonder if its color stands out?

=>  The color stands out too much.​

 

•  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.