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   제 목   What was the IUCN’s update on the Iberian lynx?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-07-29
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  A.) What was the IUCN’s update on the Iberian lynx? IUCN is the acronym for the International Union for Conservation of Nature. It has kept records of those that are threatened or endangered to make the IUCN's Red List. Those on the Red List are said to be endangered. The Iberian lynx adult population was no more than 100 by the early 2000s. So it was placed in the IUCN's Red List. But wildlife workers' operations have an increased its population, which enabled its level to be lowered from 'endangered' level to 'vulnerable'.​
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A.) What was the IUCN’s update on the Iberian lynx?

 

IUCN is the acronym for the International Union for Conservation of Nature.

It has kept records of those that are threatened or endangered to make the IUCN's Red List.

Those on the Red List are said to be endangered.

The Iberian lynx adult population was no more than 100 by the early 2000s.

So it was placed in the IUCN's Red List.

But wildlife workers' operations have an increased its population, 

which enabled its level to be lowered from 'endangered' level to 'vulnerable'.​  ✔️

  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.