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   제 목   What are the advantages and disadvantages of being a NATO member?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-07-30
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  A.) What are the advantages and disadvantages of being a NATO member? The article 5 of the NATO agreement states that an attack on a member country mean an attack on all members. Each member country should spend 2% of its wealth on military. So umbrella sharing could be one of advantages whearas financial burden could be one of disadvantages.
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A.) What are the advantages and disadvantages of being a NATO member?

 

The article 5 of the NATO agreement states that an attack on a member country  mean an attack on all members.

Each member country should spend 2% of its wealth on military. 

So umbrella sharing could be one of advantages whearas financial burden could be one of disadvantages.

 

=>  Article 5 of the NATO agreement states that an attack on a member country means an attack on all members.

Each member country should spend 2% of its wealth on the military. 

So umbrella sharing could be one of the advantages whereas financial burden could be one of the disadvantages.

 

  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.