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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-05-27
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  I feel blue nowadays. My knee hurts so after I play table tennis, I get pain. As you know, I really like playing table tennis. As of now, I am thinking of stopping table tennis. If I don't go to the table tennis club, I would be very sad. Well, when I get up in the morning I don't feel pain on my knee. I am okay. So all that matters is playing table tennis. Well, I uploaded my poem on the poem club online. People read my pome and they clicked I like button. When I saw that, I was happy. Bye
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I feel blue nowadays. My knee hurts after I play table tennis, I get pain. As you know, I really like playing table tennis. As of now, I am thinking of stopping table tennis. If I don't go to the table tennis club, I will be very sad. Well, when I get up in the morning, I don't feel the pain on my knee. I am okay. So, all that matters is playing table tennis. Well, I uploaded my poem on the poem club website. People read my poem and they clicked the “I like button”. When I saw that, I was happy. Bye