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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-05-30
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  It was raining today. My husband and I went around the lake in the rain. We felt a little chilly. When I saw rain dropping on the water, it looked beautiful. We were sitting on the bench and talking with each other. I think that our life is very simple. We have the same routine everyday. I go to the table tennis club every evening on the weekdays. My husband goes to the office. We go to the lake on the weekends. There is no new in our life. So I suggested him to visit my mom in the near future. Acutally, when I called my mom, she said, "she is loney". My husband agreed with me. I thanked him for that. Bye~
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It was raining. My husband and I went around the lake while it was raining. We felt a little chilly. When I saw the raindrops falling in the water, it looked beautiful. We were sitting on the bench while talking with each other .I think that our life is very simple. We have the same routine every day. I go to the table tennis club every evening on weekdays. My husband goes to the office. We go to the lake on weekends. There is no new in our life. So, I suggested that he would visit my mom in the near future. Actually, when I called my mom, she said that, she was lonely. My husband agreed with me. I thanked him for that. Bye~