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   교정강사   Catherine(C)    등록일   2021-05-31
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  BOOK: CORE ENGLISH BASIC (1) A. Can computer games be a part of our education and learning how? Yes, they can. Because I have a Solitaire Collection in my computer. That's game is can do a brain development. B. Make these sentences into English. (05/31/21) -어제 뭐 했니?: What did you do on yesterday? -놀이 공원에 갔었어. 사진 엄청 많이 찍었어.내가 보여줄게.: I went an amusement park. I took lots of pictures. -멋있다! 너는 뭐 했니?: That's cool! How about you? (I'm so sorry to couldn't solve 'A' because I saw the feedback too fast.) (THANK YOU SO MUCH) (I'm so sorry to couldn't do 'A' because I saw the feedback too early.)
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A. Can computer games be a part of our education and learning how?

Yes, they can.

Because I have a  Solitaire Collection in my computer. That's game is can do a brain development. ---? Yes, they can.

Because I have a Solitaire Collection in my computer. That game can boost my brain.​

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(05/31/21)

-어제 뭐 했니?

What did you do on yesterday? Corrected pattern=>​ What did you do yesterday?

-놀이 공원에 갔었어. 사진 엄청 많이 찍었어.내가 보여줄게.

I went an amusement park. I took lots of pictures. Corrected pattern=> I went to an amusement park. I took a lot of pictures. I'll show you them.

-멋있다! 너는 뭐 했니?

That's cool! How about you? Corrected pattern=> How nice! What did you do?