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   교정강사   Jenylyn(C)    등록일   2021-05-31
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  I mostly walk 1.2km. Lightly stretch before walking 그러길 바랄게. 그런데, 너는 여기 왜 왔니? 새 컴퓨터에는 게임이하나도 없어서. I hope so. By the way, why are you here? I don't have any games on my new computer.
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HOMEWORK CORRECTION: 

 

A.

I mostly walk 1.2km.  Lightly stretch before walking 

Better: I sometimes walk for 1.2km.​ I do lightly stretching before walking.

 

B.

I hope so.

By the way, why are you here?

=> Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. 

I don't have any games on my new computer.

Better: There are no game programs in the new computer.