(05/27/21)

-넌 언제 나한테 시간을 내줄 수 있어?

 When can you let your time to me? -> When can you make some time for me?

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically. 

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-보통 어디에서 데이트를 하니?

  Where do you usually date? -> Where do you usually go on a date?

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

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