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   제 목   Homework - 2021.05.31 (Lydia)    상 태  
   교정강사   Noemi(C)    등록일   2021-06-06
   작성내용
  A. What's the best amusement park in the world? Why do you think so? - Actually, I cannot go to many amusㄷment parks so it is a quite difficult question. However, I think, Universal Studios is the best amusement park in the world. Because I love 'Harry Potter' and I could experience his world in the Universal Studios. It was really nice experience for me. B. Make these sentences into English. -나는 회사에 택시를 타고 갔다. (I went to a company through a taxi.) -그 회사는 조만간 파산할 거야. (That company will go bankrupt soon.) -그는 성격이 급하고 화를 잘 낸다. (He is hot-tempered and he gets angry easily.)
   교정내용
 

A. What's the best amusement park in the world? Why do you think so?

 - Actually, I cannot go to many amusㄷment parks so it is a quite difficult question. 

  => Actually, I cannot go to many amusement parks so it is a quite difficult question. 

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.     

 

However, I think, Universal Studios is the best amusement park in the world. ✔   

 

 

Because I love 'Harry Potter' and I could experience his world in the Universal Studios. 

  => Because, I love 'Harry Potter' and I could experience his world in Universal Studios. ​

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.    

 

It was really nice experience for me.

  => It was a really nice experience for me.​

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.    

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

-나는 회사에 택시를 타고 갔다. (I went to a company through a taxi.)

  => I took a taxi to the company.​

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.   

 

-그 회사는 조만간 파산할 거야. (That company will go bankrupt soon.)

  => The company will go bankrupt sooner or later.​

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.   

 

-그는 성격이 급하고 화를 잘 낸다. (He is hot-tempered and he gets angry easily.)​ 

  => He has a quick temper and gets angry easily.​

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.