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   제 목   Is it a good decision to build a movable floor in the center of Rome's Colosseum?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-06-06
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  HOMEWORK} A.) Is it a good decision to build a movable floor in the center of Rome's Colosseum? The new floor will help the old ruins, Colosseum from weakening to perish, So I would like to support the decision. B.) Make these sentences into English. (06/04/21) -그 가격을 고집하시면 더 이상 거래하기 어렵습니다. Your adherence to the price would make our business harder any more. -품질과 보증 서비스를 감안하면 가격이 그리 높지도 않습니다. Considering quality and assurance service, the price is not so high. -더 좋은 가격을 확보해 경쟁에서 우위를 차지해야 합니다. With securing better price, we must prevail in competition.
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HOMEWORK}

A.) Is it a good decision to build a movable floor in the center of Rome's Colosseum?

 

The  new floor will help the old ruins, Colosseum  from weakening to perish,

So I would like to support the decision.

 

=> The new floor will help the old ruin of the Colosseum from weakening to perish. SoI would like to support the decision.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(06/04/21)

 

-그 가격을 고집하시면 더 이상 거래하기 어렵습니다.

Your adherence to the price  would make our business harder any more. 


=> It's difficult to proceed with our business if you insist on those prices.

-품질과 보증 서비스를 감안하면 가격이 그리 높지도 않습니다.

Considering  quality and  assurance service, the price  is not so high.


=> The prices aren't excessive if you consider quality and warranty service.

-더 좋은 가격을 확보해 경쟁에서 우위를 차지해야 합니다.

With securing better price, we must prevail in competition.


=> We need a competitive edge by securing better prices.

 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.