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   교정강사   Catherine(C)    등록일   2021-06-07
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  BOOK: CORE ENGLISH BASIC A. What kind of exercise do you think is best? I think dodgeball is best exercise. Because dodgeball is can join everyone. And it need only one ball and players. (But really best exercise is everyone can join exercise.) B. Make these sentences into English. (06/07/21) -달리기 시합중이야.: We are doing running. -정말? 재미 있겠다.: Really? It looks fun. -달려, 얄미야!:Run, Yalmi! (THANK YOU SO MUCH)
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A. What kind of exercise do you think is best?

I think  dodgeball is best exercise. ---> I think dodgeball is the best exercise.​

 

Because dodgeball is can join everyone. ---> Because, everyone​ can ​join in playing​ dodgeball.​

 

And it need only one ball and players. ---> And, it needs only one ball and some players.​

 

(But really best exercise is everyone can join exercise.) ---> (But, the best exercise is that everyone can join.)​

 

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

B. Make these sentences into English.

(06/07/21)

-달리기 시합중이야.

We are doing running. Corrected pattern=> They are running in a race.

-정말? 재미 있겠다.

Really? It looks fun. Corrected pattern=>​Really? It sounds interesting.

-달려, 얄미야!

Run, Yalmi! Corrected pattern=>​ Go, go, Yalmi.