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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-06-10
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  It is hot nowadays. I feel like summer already has come. I will take a therapy in the orthopedics this afternoon. I played table tennis with my partner in the club as a 1 day member yesterday. That means I paid for only one day. At first, I didn't feel pain on my right knee but as time goes by my pain got back again. I was disappointed. I made a decision to keep taking the therapy on and on. Fortunately, when I take a walk at the park I don't feel pain. So, instead of playing table tennis, I will just walk at the park and the small mountain connected to the park. All that matters is the hot weather. I will take a walk in the evening but it is still hot even in the evening. I wish I can go back to the club in a short time. Bye~
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It is hot nowadays. I feel like summer has already come. I will take a therapy in the orthopedics this afternoon. I played table tennis with my partner in the club as a day member yesterday. That means I paid for only one day. At first, I didn't feel the pain on my right knee but as time goes by my pain got back again. I was disappointed. I made a decision to keep taking the therapy. Fortunately, when I take a walk at the park. I don't feel the pain. So, instead of playing table tennis, I will just walk at the park and in the small mountain connected to the park. All that matters is the hot weather. I will take a walk in the evening but it is still hot even in the evening.

I wish I could go back to the club in a short time. Bye~