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   제 목   Homework - 2021.06.09 (Lydia)    상 태  
   교정강사   Noemi(C)    등록일   2021-06-13
   작성내용
  A. What is your favorite dessert? Why do you like it? - I love every dessert. But my favorite dessert is chocolate cake. Actually, I just like chocolate and I want to eat a piece of chocolate cake right now. B. Make these sentences into English. (06/09/21) -아니야, 얄미가 덕보보다 더 빨라. (No (It is not true), 얄미 is faster than 덕보.) -덕보가 심순이보다 키가 커.그래서 덕보가 심순이보다 빨라. (덕순 is taller than 심순. So 덕보 is faster than 심순.) -덕보는 얄미보다 무겁다. 그래서 그는 얄미보다 느립니다. (덕보 is heavier than 얄미. So he is slower than 얄미.)
   교정내용
 

A. What is your favorite dessert? Why do you like it?

- I love every dessert. ✔   

 

But my favorite dessert is chocolate cake. ✔   

 

Actually, I just like chocolate and I want to eat a piece of chocolate cake right now.  ✔   

 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(06/09/21)

-아니야, 얄미가 덕보보다 더 빨라. (No (It is not true), 얄미 is faster than 덕보.)

  => No, Yalmi is faster than Dugbo.​

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.     

 

-덕보가 심순이보다 키가 커.그래서 덕보가 심순이보다 빨라. (덕순 is taller than 심순. So 덕보 is faster than 심순.)

  => Dugbo is taller than Simsoon. So, he is faster than Simsoon.​

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.     

 

-덕보는 얄미보다 무겁다. 그래서 그는 얄미보다 느립니다. (덕보 is heavier than 얄미. So he is slower than 얄미.)

  => Dugbo is heavier than Yalmi. So, he is slower than Yalmi.​

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.    ​