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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-06-17
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  Now I am checking the price of the stocks I bought on the smartphone. I earned money yesterday but I am loosing money now. I regretted to sell the stock yesterday. I just let it go and I am trying to keep calm. I am planning to sell all of my stocks in April next year. Because I need money then. We might deposit more money in my husband's office. He works in his office we already deposited a lot of money. He has used for 5 years until now. Maybe the owner of the office asks my husband more money. So I have to give him money I've got. But that is okay. All I want is growing money with my stocks. I just keep my eyes on the shift of their price. I know that it is very hard to make money with stocks. I also know the interest of bank is very small. So I chose to buy stocks. Bye
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Now I am checking the price of the stocks. I bought on my smartphone. I earned money yesterday but I am losing money now. I regretted selling the stock yesterday. I just let it go and I am trying to keep calm. I am planning to sell all of my stocks in April next year. Because I need money then. We might deposit more money for my husband's office. He works in his office we already deposited a lot of money. He has been using it for 5 years. Maybe the owner of the office asks my husband more money. So, I have to give him money that I’ve got. But that is okay.  All I want is to earn money with my stocks. I just keep my eyes on the shift of their prices. I know that it is very hard to make money with stocks. I also know the interest from the bank is very small. So, I chose to buy stocks. Bye