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   제 목   Why does the South African government give an annual sum to the Zulu royal family?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-06-17
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  A.) Why does the South African government give an annual sum to the Zulu royal family? The Zulu king has no political power whereas he safeguards people's customs,cultures and language in the province of Kwazula-Natal. The goverment can't help recognize his existence, which would be the reason for supporting th royal line. B.) Make these sentences into English. (06/16/21) -신용장을 여는 것은 추가적으로 몇 가지 거래방법을 가능케 만들지요. Opening LC enables us for additional several transactions. -대금지불은 전신환 송금으로 하셔야 합니다. Payment must be done through telegraphic transfer. -전신한 송금이 가장 빠르고 효율적인 결제 방법일 것입니다. Telegraphic transfer would be the fastest and most effective way of payment.
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A.) Why does the South African government give an annual sum to the Zulu royal family? 

 

The  Zulu king has no political power whereas he safeguards people's customs,cultures and language 

 in the province of Kwazula-Natal.

The goverment can't help recognize his existence, which would be the reason for supporting th royal line.

 

=> The Zulu king has no political power, whereas he safeguards people's customs, cultures and language 

 in the province of Kwazula-Natal. The government can't help recognize his existence, which would be the reason for supporting the royal line.

 B.) Make these sentences into English. 

 

 (06/16/21)

 

-신용장을 여는 것은 추가적으로 몇 가지 거래방법을 가능케 만들지요.

Opening LC enables  us  for additional  several transactions. 

OR 

=> Opening a letter of credit makes several other methods of transaction possible.

 

-대금지불은 전신환 송금으로 하셔야 합니다.

Payment must be done through telegraphic transfer. 

 

 

OR 

=> Payment must be made by wire transfer. 

 

-전신한 송금이 가장 빠르고 효율적인 결제 방법일 것입니다.

Telegraphic transfer would be the fastest and most effective way of payment. 

 

 

OR 

=> Wire transfer will be the quickest and most efficient method of payment.


• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.