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   제 목   Homework - 2021.06.14 (Lydia)    상 태  
   교정강사   Noemi(C)    등록일   2021-06-20
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  A. What do you do to you look after your teeth? - I went shopping afterwards. So I bought some stickers to decorate the photos and some cat food for our school's cats. They are so cute and I love them! B. Make these sentences into English. (06/14/21) -넌 신선한 야채를 매일 먹어야 해. (You must eat fresh vegetables every day.) -그녀는 운동을 활동적으로 한다. (She does exercise actively.) -그들은 단순한 결혼식을 했다. (They held a simple wedding.)
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A. What do you do to you look after your teeth?

- I went shopping afterwards. ✔  

 

So I bought some stickers to decorate the photos and some cat food for our school's cats. ✔  

 

They are so cute and I love them!✔  

 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(06/14/21)

-넌 신선한 야채를 매일 먹어야 해. (You must eat fresh vegetables every day.)

  => You should eat fresh vegetable everyday.​

  => Your answer is correct but here's another way of saying it.  

 

-그녀는 운동을 활동적으로 한다. (She does exercise actively.)  

=> She is active in sports.​

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically. 

-그들은 단순한 결혼식을 했다. (They held a simple wedding.)

  => They had a simple wedding.​

  => Your answer is correct but here's another way of saying it.  ​